Friday, June 29, 2012

Gray's Bidets - Ch. 7 (part 2) and 8 (part 1)

Hello, friends!

Here is another post of Gray's Bidets. If you'd like to read the entirety of the novel so far, you may find it at this link.

Enjoy!

Gray's Bidets - Ch. 7b_8

Wednesday, June 27, 2012

Gray's Bidets - Ch. 7

Hello friends!

It's been a few days as I've been drawn to other writing tasks. I was under a deadline to submit some comedy sketches, but now I'm back on task for this book!

I mentioned to my dad yesterday that writing this novel has been more difficult than previous stories because I started with a plot idea, not a character. Normally I'm used to constructing a story around a character and what their biggest challenges might be. This story has taken a roundabout way to that through the idea of a conspiracy theory I found particularly interesting. I made a character through the plot and now I'm going deeper into the character and settling back into my groove of story-constructing. You probably don't care to know all of that, but I find it very helpful to explain my process to myself so I know where to go from here and what to be working on.

If you'd like to read all of Gray's Bidets, you can find a link to it here.

Again thank you for your helpful feedback. I really appreciate it!

Gray's Bidets - Ch. 7

Saturday, June 23, 2012

Gray's Bidets - Chapter 6

Hey friends!

Woof! So I had eye surgery two days ago and things are healing up quite nicely. I thought I could use the surgery as an excuse to keep from writing for a few more days, but alas, I have no excuse but writer's block. Luckily, I've got a plot outline written out, so things should start coming together.

If you'd like to read the entirety of Gray's Bidets, you can find the link here. Otherwise, just read below for the next installment.

Again, thank you for reading. I really do appreciate your following and feedback. (:

Gray's Bidets - Ch. 6

Wednesday, June 20, 2012

Gray's Bidets - Chapter 5 (Part Two)

Hello friends!

I think I'm starting to get a feel for how I want this novel to unfold. I've never written a mystery before, and thus, have never had to plan my novels out from start to finish. I've always let them organically happen, and I think that might be my problem. Henry, as a character, can organically unfold on the page any way he will, but the plot needs some direction. And I think I've gotten some.

At any rate, I've finished chapter five. Chapter six will have some more external stimulation, I promise. (:

And if you'd like to read Gray's Bidets in its entirety, you can find it at this link.

Finally, I'll be getting eye surgery tomorrow, and while I'd love to continue writing and will try my hardest to make it work, it might throw a wrench in the works if I can't look at my computer screen. We'll see.
Again, thank you all for reading along. I received some genuinely positive feedback from a friend yesterday and it really helped me realize why I like to write. It's to incite something, positive or negative, in people and get them thinking. Get me thinking. I'm grateful to be refreshed to that sentiment now in the early stages of this book.

Gray's Bidets - Ch. 5b

Tuesday, June 19, 2012

Gray's Bidets - Ch. 5 (Part One)

Hey all!

Sorry about the half chapter posts. Man, today was a rough one for writing! I tried to power through and managed to get 4 1/2 pages out today. Hopefully it'll come better tomorrow.

If you'd like to read the entirety of Gray's Bidets so far, you can find it at this link.

Thanks for all of your feedback. It really helps knowing people read this stuff. (:

Gray's Bidets - Ch. 5a

Monday, June 18, 2012

Gray's Bidets - Ch. 4 (Part 2)

Friends! Hello! I'm sorry this post is a little late, but I ended up leaving my laptop at the SLC airport. Thankfully, it was found with airport security and my sister emailed my novel drafts so that I could work from my parents' computer here in Oregon. Hooray!

At any rate, here's the second half of chapter 4. Hoping to get somewhere with this character I'm getting attached to. (: And remember, you can find the whole novel so far of Gray's Bidets at this link.
Gray's Bidets Ch. 4b

Thursday, June 14, 2012

Gray's Bidets - Ch. 4 (Part 1)

Hello all! I think I'm getting more and more into this character's voice, which is exciting. It's been a while since I've started a novel, and it's a thrilling and nerve-wracking experience. Thanks so much to all of you who've already shown such enthusiasm and support for the story. (:

If you'd like to read Gray's Bidets in its entirety so far, you can find it here.


Gray's Bidets - Ch. 4a

Wednesday, June 13, 2012

Gray's Bidets - Ch. 3

Hey all! If you'd like to read Gray's Bidets in its entirety so far, you can find it at this link.

For now, though, I think I'm finally getting back into the groove of this thing. I'm starting to find my narrator's voice, and I hope that's coming through. For those of you following along, thank you thank you. Things are heating up. (:


Gray's Bidets - Ch. 3

Tuesday, June 12, 2012

Gray's Bidets - Chapter 2

Hello all!

Chapter two. Woof. It's been a long time since I've started a novel.


Gray's Bidets - Ch. 2

Monday, June 11, 2012

Gray's Bidets - Chapter 1



Hey all! Welcome to my blog for the books I'm writing. I worked on Rae last year on my other blog, but have decided to keep that site separate for my church writing.

This blog will be the start of my new novel, tentatively titled Gray's Bidets. It's a YA novel from the perspective of a fifteen year-old boy with ADHD. The story will dabble in mystery and some form of magical realism, while being tethered to this real, contemporary world.... Unless I go in a completely different direction. How exciting!

I find that when I post my writing, I'm given accountability that keeps me writing. So if you'd like to embark with me in some experimental posts while I get a feel for this narrator, please tune in. I'll try to keep posting every day.

Love to you all,
Whit